Head of Household #5 (Once Upon a Time)

- Jiminy Cricket

Judge 1: "This one was really good! I feel like you could have written a lot more if it wasn't for the 700 words or less restriction. If this was made into a movie and the plot was stretched out, I would definitely watch it. I love how fleshed out the characters are."

Judge 2: That was sorta interesting but it randomly seemed rushed and there wasn't anything that stood out.  The names are ridiculous too.

Judge: 3: I visited a few stories while reading this one. Game of Thrones, Frozen, etc. It was fun. I feel like it's been done somewhat before but still good.

- Maleficent:

Judge 1: Are Mary Kate and Ashley still acting? I feel bad that they're now being overshadowed by their younger, way more attractive sister Elizabeth. But I digress. This is a little dark, but fairy tales are usually originally dark. It's not bad. I like the general premise. It could have been written better, but this was good.

Judge 2: Okay this one was much better, though the casting choices here are questionable. Fun premise, would be better if this was X-rated.

Judge 3: You actors were so random lmao. The story took a turn I was not quite expecting a few times, good job on that.

- Red Riding Hood:

Judge 1: This was pretty predictable until the end, but very interesting take on the character. Those poor wolves. I'm biased though. I liked this. It's not the best, but it's good.

Judge 2: This one is so far my favorite, so deliciously dark and well worth reading. Interesting you put the character analysis after though.

Judge 3: Lmao eww but cool ending. I saw part of it coming once he looked out the window but the pie at the end was a good twist.  

-Snow White:

Judge 1: I don't know if this was intended to be funny or not, but I found it hilarious lmao. I've heard that riddle before and it took me like a whole minute and a half before I got it. This was pretty short.

Judge 2: This one seemed to be rushed a little and didn't make sense at times, but it was still semi-enjoyable which is all that counts.

Judge 3: I feel like there was some Pirates/Peter Pan and Snow White inspiration here. You guys are so grimm and killing people off left and right. <3

- Tinkerbell:

Judge 1: lmao this was funny. I doubt it's going to win, but this is so weird and stuff that I kind of like it.

Judge 2: Rofl I dunno if this was meant to be serious but the character analyses were the most fun in this submission. Everything else is such a mess

Judge 3: Lmao to ScarJo being a Ham-Cheese Sandwich with a drinking problem. HAHA I can't even with this story lmao lord.

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